I am also working hard, per the same fantastic feedback from Robin Puelma, to make the dilemma in Under very clear from page one. When I started writing Under many years ago I was such a new writer that I had no idea what dilemma was. Thanks to The 90-Day Rewrite by Alan Watt, a book Robin highly recommended, I now know better. But of course knowing something doesn’t make it easy, which is why I will be paying close attention to this issue as I revise Under.


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