First Draft Read Though Complete

I just read through Taylor’s first draft comments and feedback for DESCENDANTS. I can’t thank him enough. The beginning of the story, protagonist’s dilemma, and the climax needs work, but I have a plan and will be working to improve this story! Can’t wait to see how the book improves!

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Thank You Editors!

I have amazing friends!!! Dustin is editing UNDER, Taylor is editing DESCENDANTS, Robin is editing BACK OF BEYOND (The Legend of Spoon Book #2), and Dawn is editing NINTH NIGHT. These four stories have been on my computer for years and I’m beyond excited to see them closer than ever to being self-published.

Descendants

While UNDER, NINTH NIGHT, and BACK OF BEYOND are getting edited by friends, I’m using this time to revise and edit a novel I started in 2010. This story is called DESCENDANTS. It’s an action-packed urban fantasy where a boy named Emery accidentally transforms his sister to gold, discovers he’s a descendant of King Midas, chooses to venture into the world to save his sister and reverse his new gift, and all the while is pursed by other Descendants who want to capture him for his new gift.